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perring123

02/27/2024, 4:26 PM
i love this! your writing is very polished, and the little bits of more poetic prose is beautiful against the more straightforward sentences. the only edit i'd make is remove 'aptly' since it's redundant. did you need more specific feedback? i wouldn't mind looking over more of it (also i don't know if this is the right channel either 😂)