I don’t know if this is the right thread, and I know this section is out of context, but I wanted to garner feedback about a long short story I’m writing! https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1098164078607859782/1212007526208507924/IMG_6465.png?ex=65f044f8&is=65ddcff8&hm=92d87ae9c1a2789b8b6e04514e7b87ebcd1c6434cf84895859cc34d80ed5e88d&