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# rejection-therapy
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garrett7554

02/08/2024, 4:00 PM
Personally I would say the revised version is too clipped; and it has lost the rhythm in the longer version—i liked that touch it was like a conveyor belt delivering metaphors. I mean both ways can work eg compare the lyrics of Counting Crows ‘Murder of one’ an Suzanne Vega’s ‘Small Blue Thing’ 🙂