# just-chill

Gen/ Small Warrior

09/29/2023, 1:12 PM
I like to give feedback on stories before the submission window closes so this is my busy time and I just read had problems with structure and a lot of typos. I was taking notes and it was a good original story and I was getting really into it...then he Rick Rolled me on the ending...I can safely say I am both upset, cause I wanted to know what happened next, and amused though I did suggest finishing it and not submitting as is, lol